|Reviews for Crossroads|
| Oak Leaf Ninja chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Last drop of life... Entrancing...
| Ladder In My Tights chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Wow this is amazing. I love the use of metaphors you used they really played well in the poem. I love the line "Where all my haunting ghosts come to play with my dismembered soul which is my fault I know." Keep writing I want to read more!
Ladder In My Tights :)
| Demon Love chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Nice Imagery! I love the feel i get from this poem! Very good descriptions. I can really get into this! Great Job
| Starry-eyed Starfish chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
I'm not really one for poetry (( probably because I suck at it... )) but that was amazing! It was really imaginative, sensitive and mysterious, filled with emotion I really enjoyed reading it :P
I don't know what the poem was supposed to be about or what others think it was about, but I feel that it was about an impending ending (( hey, that rhymes! . ...Anyway... )) that the writer cannot escape, whether it be good or bad. I don't know if this was intended or if it's just the structure of all your poems, or if poems are supposed to be this way - I am a completely poem-air-head O.O - but putting fullstops at the end added to the sense of a foreboding end :'3
My favourite line is probably: "And if you were to find me, I think I'd shine the light on the last drop of life." because it's so poetic and mysterious and after accumulating all of the emotion, it seemed that it was all let out like a sigh after a long while :)
Keep it up :D
P.s. Don't worry about long poems... A) I think the length suited it B) ...My review is definitely worse... O.O
| AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
I liked the way it sounded like a short story. The poem was really good, I liked the longer lines, it worked on this. I think that structure works with the poem, I like the way that the longer lines work together however I don't think you could apply this structure to all poems you write. Thank you, I really liked it! Nice job :-D
| Delilah Brightman chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
I love this poem. Especially how the it can be a happy poem too. if you view the death as the letting go of the past and starting a new life. :)
| sapphireshadow15 chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Wow! Great! :D It has the feel of a short story just like the other one. And I like the poem lines themselves alot. And don't worry about it being too long...0_o mine are way worse haha
| Lizard1856 chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Thats really, really, really good! That's definitley a poem with heart, feeling, and a really sad message. I love it! I will keep reading!
| wolfman7849 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
all i can say is O_O nice