|Reviews for The Creature of the Scarlet Mist|
| Naver chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
It seems like a poem that would go in a collection of halloween poems. I think its very descriptive and can send a slight chill down the reader's neck as they thing of being eaten. Good! Continue writing. :)
| Cretha Loesing chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
I loved it.
The idea of a hungry demon... Hungry! There's too little of these sorts of things out.
A little bit of an awkward word choice here an there... i got the feeling you wanted to rhyme, but had trouble with that.