|Reviews for Falling Forward|
| MethodlessMadness chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
Do I like this better than your more recent ones?
It's a more /complete/ sense of rhythmic freestyle, I thinnk, instead of just a bunch of adjectives thrown together. There's an actual painted image coming to mind here, instead of abstract colors.
| Satine Onyx chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
It's a good poem, but It leaves me a little bit frustrated. As is a book ends as the story had finally started. Do you know what I mean ?
| Naver chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Hmm.. it's good though I wish it had more descriptions on this feeling you have. :)