Reviews for Normal
xLilyx chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Interesting structure, I like the word crack with the slashes, it gives a sort of added visual punch. Light is another good one, I don't think it's needed so much in other places though because it overwhelmed me a bit and made actually reading the poem difficult. The brackets are fun though, like a little voice over the person's shoulder. Nice experiment, normal is indeed over rated :)
UnpredictableMe chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
impressive..