Reviews for Himitsu to Hoshi
Kevin Reaves chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
This is horrible. The prose is badly made and I'm not one for Crossdressing. I won't be reading this anymore than I have. Ugh.
Felrain chapter 3 . 11/30/2012
Youve done a good job on this! Keep it up'
Eden Ellegory chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
AWESOME! *applauds with great enthusiasm*
Jax Creation chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Haha this is adorable :3 Very shojo-manga-like!
(I'll be honest, I'm a sucker for bishies and gender-benders XD)

Really well written and I love what I've read so far!

Only thing I want to point out is that you seem to be missing a section break when the POV changes from Reika and Yui to Ai [just before "One floor up"]

Also, keep an eye on your tenses. You've accidentally slipped from past to present tense at some points [e.g. 4th paragraph: "Reika stares after Yui..."]

Other than those small things, it's pretty much impeccable :3

Great work guys, can't wait to read more! I'm definitely subscribing (and adding you to the School Life Manga community.)

- Jax
Lavender Town Massacre chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
This is awesome!
14writtenworlds chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
It's interesting, good job!