Reviews for why i wanted you in the dark
Brianarae0408 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
This poem is just amazing. You have talent, no doubt.
Key Atlas chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
This was so amazing! I love the end where she wants him to touch her and pass on the electric current. So romantic!
swan-scones chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
You've expressed that love in such a unique, beautiful way. How lovely!
electrical moon chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
You've got really great and original imagery here; I love the twist on people being filled with light. The second line is great too!
SKnight8046 chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
This is really romantic, I've felt very similarly before so it brings back memories. Granted they weren't the happiest memories but still, if a poem can do that, its great. :)