|Reviews for Curse At Your Existence|
| Jedi Knight chapter 1 . 6/15/2001
o_O Oooooh... nice, dark poem. Makes you think. Cool.
| MidnightBlaze chapter 1 . 6/14/2001
Hmmmm... Interesting... You're right, it's not one of your best, but it is pretty good. I have one issue, but hey, I do it too, so I know it's hard. The number of the lines in a stanza, try to make them as close to even as you can... But, it was good. Oh, and also? Obsessed with death much? Lol, it's allright...
| w. a. monaghan chapter 1 . 6/5/2001
Aa! :D Dark poetry rocks! - *holds up her little flag* Nice use of metaphor. Boy, this topic has been brooded over in so many pieces of litterature than I care to count, but different and original every time. *grins* Ultra shibby poem! Y'know what, expand on the topic! (If you can, cuz it's sometimes just better to keep it short.. *shruggs*) Throw in a bit more angst, we can never get enough of that! And badda bing badda boom! (GAH! o.O I sound like a gangster! *shudders*)