Reviews for Curse At Your Existence
Jedi Knight chapter 1 . 6/15/2001
o_O Oooooh... nice, dark poem. Makes you think. Cool.
MidnightBlaze chapter 1 . 6/14/2001
Hmmmm... Interesting... You're right, it's not one of your best, but it is pretty good. I have one issue, but hey, I do it too, so I know it's hard. The number of the lines in a stanza, try to make them as close to even as you can... But, it was good. Oh, and also? Obsessed with death much? Lol, it's allright...

Midnight Forever
w. a. monaghan chapter 1 . 6/5/2001
Aa! :D Dark poetry rocks! - *holds up her little flag* Nice use of metaphor. Boy, this topic has been brooded over in so many pieces of litterature than I care to count, but different and original every time. *grins* Ultra shibby poem! Y'know what, expand on the topic! (If you can, cuz it's sometimes just better to keep it short.. *shruggs*) Throw in a bit more angst, we can never get enough of that! And badda bing badda boom! (GAH! o.O I sound like a gangster! *shudders*)