Reviews for Glitch
Mich625 chapter 4 . 11/9/2012
You have a vivid imagination and a lot of talent, but suggest doing a more careful job of editing first. I noticed one spelling mistakes and several mistakes in punctuation. For example, "...but the day you're taken away. Is the day you wish you've never been created." The central period is incorrect. Also, you have several missing or incorrect words. For example, "These feeling felt unnatural and chaotic..." It should be "This," not "These."
hero in a cup chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
there were a few spelling errors, but it has some potential.
malilei chapter 2 . 10/21/2012
Cool, I really like Sci-Fi, but I really LOVE this story!
But I would edit your stories before putting them on, there's a spelling mistake. You wrote 'programed' instead of 'programmed.' But other than that, it was REALLY GOOD!