Ngaww I really loved it. It's not too long and it's quirky. I liked the idea of the literally stuck in a hole setting.

Welcome back! Glad to see you, or read your work. I have missed your writing. Thanks.

THIS IS AMAZING I LOVE IT AND YOU ARE SO GREAT! look at me all fangirlin' over fictionpress. :D keep it up, darling.

hahaha, so funny and cute :)) This was full of so many awesome one-liners - the lip-balm one, the hole one (of COURSE!) and others which made me laugh out loud!

Made my day :D

Ri

I love how I didn’t even realize the characters were nameless until you brought it up. There really was a lot of development crammed in those 2,000 words. :)

You have a knack for making me fall in love with the people and settings you create. However, I think what makes it for me is the pairing of witty narration and effortless dialogue. ‘Hey, I'm still alive, your lip balm tastes awesome by the way’ might be my new favorite fictionpress line. Definitely had me grinning at the end, and I'm positive this is a one-shot read again and again.

And of course I’m thrilled that you’re still writing and sharing. Hope to read more soon!

Ooh this was so brilliant! I really do miss your writing. I don't even care if they're one shots because even your one shots are so fun to read :D

I hope your bad day wasn't too bad, I know your story definitely lifted up my spirits from stressful exam studying that I need to do which I haven't even started at all :P

Anyway, I loved the story and it was soo good to read something of yours again!

Wow this was just an amazing story. It is so sweet. I loved the interaction and the double meaning "I'm in a hole"!

I love this, this is both hilarious and sweet. Great grammar (I just RPd with this guy on FF who probably doesn't know what punctuation is and I feel so much better now XD)

Oh gosh that was so good I can't even explain it. I usually like giving constructive criticism, but I honestly couldn't find anything wrong with this fanfic. Really. Beautiful work!

This is a pretty interesting story haha. No lie. It's the twist of being stuck in a closet/bathroom haha. I kinda like how you brought in their history.

Loved the story!
*Ngoc1231*

This was my life. Ending up with your best friend is one of the greatest feelings. You don't have to be fake, because he already knows you too well. Of course, reality is a little different, when happy-ever-after rarely happens, and risking so much just isn't worth it. But that bit of happiness is still irreplaceable. These two reminded me of my old life. :3

As always, adorable and just the right length for a quick dose of cute. Hope your day gets/got better!

I've missed your stories with their witty banter and fun characters!
Loved this unamed couple- glad you're alive!

So cute. Came here on the recommendation of the author "Love is a Ring Toss Game." Looking forward to reading some of your other stories!

Hey, Jess! I miss you and your writing. This was a cute one-shot. And an interesting concept. A couple in a hole. lol. I love it. If you need to brainstorm any ideas, then feel free to e-mail me! It's great to see you're still writing, though. I'm sure an idea will come to you and stick. You have such a great imagination, that I'm sure you'll think of something :)