|Reviews for Scenes from a Coffee Shop|
| Deserthawk chapter 2 . 10/27/2012
I like zampire. Sounds like a fun time.
It's a nice chronicle of what exactly (?) is going on. If ya wanted to test out your creative powers that would be fun too. Like what was going on with that table of four and that guy with the suit.
But you should write whatever you want, really.
| Deserthawk chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
This is an interesting idea. You describe people nicely. I got a good image but didn't feel flooded with details. I'm picturing a 'trendy' cafe for some reason. I mean not a starbucks.
Could imagine this as the start of a story.
Random, but is this a cafe with 'regulars'? Or mostly new people.
Do you ever speculate about their lives? That would be fun to hear.
| AxeMurderingAxolotl chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Interesting concept- looking forward to next weeks. I like the Barbie analogy. Is it going to be a one-shot each time, or a semi-continuing story? Very descriptive, nice start :).