Reviews for SMOKE
DeacccctivatedAccount chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
This is far better than any "Don't Smoke" lesson they give at schools. This is very real, and very good. Keep writing!
Fire'sTiger chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
:) I love this! I was going to put how excited I got about how dark this is, then I finished reading your NA and saw the people trying to be like chimneys. I have to laugh instead. :P
ApplesLoveShinigami chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Really great story! It's so sad... and written in a really original way. I'm glad that it's not the typical writing style.
Consulting Jedi chapter 1 . 10/28/2012 this is what they should put on the 'no smoking' commercials!
harrisonmarks chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
As a former smoker I can appreciate this story. I am just thankful I stopped. This story is going onto my favs
NeverFindingWhereToGo chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Both of my parents smoke, and that fact makes this story all the more funny to me. I'm really attracted to the "delicately curling in the wind" line.
sweetladyjane2012 chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
I agree completely, smoking is totally stupid...
SimonClemens chapter 1 . 10/20/2012