Reviews for Stuck At Crossroads
Veronica Fay chapter 1 . 1/22
Hi! I really like this start! I haven't come along a story like this. I hope you continue with this someday!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Your writing style itself is nice, although there could be some more meat to this first chapter. My issue is with the plausibility of this premise.
A foal with excellent bloodlines would be worth thousands upon thousands of dollars. It would not be given to a child to train. Additionally, being "off" on the foaling date like this wouldn't happen in a well run barn...generally a mare would not just be turned out with a stallion to breed, especially if the horses were top quality.
I'd recommend doing more research about horses, okay?
I do think you have something promising here, it just needs to be thought about a little more.
:)
Lolitroy chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Nice :) though you should check for spelling/grammar mistakes...