Reviews for Lost to the Sea
Hungryhipoo1000 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
I'm not sure why you asked me to critique your work, seeing how I never see the flaws in your writing. However, I will tell you what I did like :)

First of all, this story itself has so much depth to it. As 'Nuts' said, it did make me want to cry! The story made me feel heartbroken. How you put so much emotion in such a tiny piece of writing, I don't know.

I also think the amount of information left OUT of the story made it even more emotional. It left me hanging and craving to know more, and in this case, it's a good thing.

Finally, lets not forget about the personification you used for the sea! It doubled the power of the emotion in the story! I should really use personification more myself!

I hope my review made sense. I'm tired of doing homework and the wii next to me is screaming for my attention, away from fanfiction. Anyways, keep writing :)!
nuts chapter 1 . 10/22/2012