|Reviews for The Program|
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/11/2013
I feel really sad reading this and thinking of parents acting this way
| myheart4you chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
This seems to be an original version of the book Uglies... I would comment on that but I know you are just writing it for fun :)
I liked it, anyhow.
One thing you could definitely fix is making sure you stay in one tense. You kept switching from past to present tense the whole time, which made it sort of choppy.