|Reviews for surface fire|
| Logan Knipp chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
This is another one of your poems that hits home pretty hard for me. It's absolutely amazing.
| treelights chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
i love how well you can paint a situation in so few words.
| True Talker chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
This makes me think and this makes me sad.
| lyfe0verl0ad chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Deep.. I like the glass part. I actually just dropped a glass haha... It's relate able! Oh and by the way thanks for the review :') cyber hugs!
| Beth Brooks chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
this is so vivid and moving, beatiuful isn't the right word, its not dark enough, but if it was, i'd call it that.