|Reviews for Wide Awake|
| One Last Note chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
I think that this poem is a very good start. I enjoyed the imagery conjured up, but I think that there sould be a real purpose that you are trying to achieve, or else this is destined to become a very well-written poem that will unfortunately fail to actually reach out to anyone.
I believe that this would be a great shame as the poem itself is very good! I would also like a little more length as this would allow you to actually get more into the setting of the poem, and of course the whole purpose thing!
Despite that, the poem is a very promising first draft which could lead to a very good poem! keep up the good work!