For some reason, the previous review didn't get published. So here it goes again. You're brilliant. Love your writing style, so quirky. All the best! :)

This is one of the most under reviewed stories on fictionpress. You're a brilliant writer. Love your writing style, it's very quirky. Thanks for writing this. One of my favourite stories here. All the best!

Lol loved it

I don't know why this story hasn't received more reviews-it was such a good read! I read it all in a day actually. I like the way it's written, the characters seem believable for the most part, and it incorporated a bunch of cliches in the best way possible. I really enjoyed reading it, thank you :)

This was a really good read! I have to say that druv irritated me a lot! But I guess that was the point and if came out all right in tif end

It's amazing that Amy never picked up on Druv's very obvious interest in her best friend.

Why exactly is Nisha so adamantly opposed to dating or giving her heart to a man? That never seemed completely clear in the story (sorry)

Forgive me for reviewing this excellent story out of order. I wanted to get to each new chapter, so I didn't stop to review each chapter as it deserved.

I know little of India's unique culture... and to be honest, I tended to avoid stories set with that cultural context, not because I dislike the culture but because the stories sometimes under-explain some of the details. As a result, the reader is left bemused and confused.

In your story, however, although you did touch on several key cultural ideas, you made the details clear enough that it made sense... and it made the story interesting and enjoyable. I found the idea of Nisha fasting for Druv to be particularly endearing.

Your characters, at least the two main characters, were rich and deep, troubled and yet strong. Thank you for an excellent story.

Let me guess: it was a photo of Druv?