I think the concept of this story was brilliant. The writing was good, and despite not elaborating a whole lot on characters and such, it was good. It didn't have a strong plot, to be honest, but I still think it was well written, and it IS a one shot, so you can't expect but so much. And hey, one can only get better. It was definitely enjoyable and fun to read. One of the better and more unique one shots I've read on FictionPress. Keep up the good work c:

This is hilarious.

I just really, really love this. It made me smile so much that my face hurts right now.
You are perfect.

...Holy crap, everyone in this story but Samson is retarded. Everyone.

Of course, that's kind of the point.

It is really funny, though. There's not a lot of strong characters or anything like that, but it's really funny and written well to be funny, so that's okay.