|Reviews for fault|
| GrimReaping101 chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
A sweet and short poem, no more needs to be said because simple is sometimes best.
| Grammatical Assassin chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
You might consider stepping away from the common style and structure of poetry, it’s just holding you back. Your writing is fine (after all, even J.K Rowling had an editor) and there isn’t anything confusing about your messages. But everyone experiences pain and sadness; it is how you say it that separates you from the other authors on this site. As well it is the difference between being expressive and just coming off as depressive. I don’t know if you do requests, but I wouldn’t mind seeing you do a stylized monologue.