Reviews for Impressions- A Collection of One Shots |
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![]() ![]() Realistic. Nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! All 3 chapters, but especially the first. I just love the bantering Also, i would really like to also get his perspective, especially on the first and also second chapter. Do you think something like that would be possible? |
![]() ![]() Great story. Love how well you can tell a detailed story in just three chapters! Hope you can write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I'm looking forward to the next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! For a moment there I really thought is was over... luckily Alexander seriously knows how to say "I love you" :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. Great writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic! Even if it wasn't technically a one-shot. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one-shot was great. I felt like Alexander was arrogant (with issues?) and you made him develop in such a short time to a likeable person. Well done! I love it when the woman character is whitty, strong and is not afraid to say what is on her mind. Please write more of this kind of one-shots. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I too love A.A. Hawthorne. The name is just...amazing. It was a cute one shot! I definitely loved both characters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cutieeee! I love this. This so sweet and not so cliche as others. Pleeeease keep writing. I can see your potencial now. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm leaving my review on the epilogue but it counts for the first part too since i hadn't had a chance to review yet. :) i'm really latching on to your interesting characters and jobs/situations/plots... so different and refreshing from a lot of the stories i find on here set in high schools. i'll keep reading no matter how many epilogues you add, i think there is so much could be developed here! i really enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! she's funny. The dialogue's still good. Maybe someday, that oneshot will stroll into your head. In the meantime DO NOT STOP WITH THESE AMAZING DOSES OF FLUFF! i kinda need them:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh i just love this. It's perfect! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() arhh that was cute! I hope she takes a role in one of his movies so they could be together all the time (hopeless romantic that I am). I am really impressed with how you built three dimentional characters in such a short story, Mr. Hawthrone character developed a lot just through the epilouge. Great job, I loved it. (It is still somewhat of a one-shot.. I mean it is only one real chapter.. I hereby declare it a one shot ;) |