Reviews for Soul Anomaly
WolfGoesBaa chapter 111 . 5/2
Whoa! Nice power sets. I like how you played around with lightning in this chapter with all its different effects, including the whole recovering the limb to have it grow back thing. Seems Anzio can do many of the same things Milnjior can and more, guess that's why he is the Liberator of Lightning. Castor has an interest ability with the whole soul being separated from his body. If I remember correctly I think rigor mortis is sidekick slash assistant could use a similar power where she powered her attacks up using soul fragments but she could never form whole weapons with her soul. I like how this universe snd its rules are expanding.
WolfGoesBaa chapter 110 . 5/1
Hey! Soul Anomaly zero! Lol, I read it but I do not remember any of it. What was the plan with that one? Was it meant to be a prequel of some sorts?
WolfGoesBaa chapter 109 . 4/30
I agree with all those who put their hands up. Lol. I think it might be better of Lance hints at his goal and the fallen king who vanished during his first appearance before us finding out he was the fallen king deluding himself into believing he was Lance.

Other than that, it was an interesting twist. Your world building is very enjoyable. I like how you included the soul slayer along with the Arthurian inspired lore. And I never thought Lance would be able to kill base Alexander, which is pretty impressive since the head of a noble family was forced to use his Grimoir to win.
WolfGoesBaa chapter 108 . 4/30
That battle was great. I love how it started with Sairen flying up and was eventually forced to dive into Mikoto's domain in order to defeat her. It had lots of close calls and suspenseful moments.

I also like how you give each of these FELIA characters a back story. None of them feel evil for being evil. Good chapter
Kenshin Kojima chapter 114 . 4/24
Yay! A new chapter has been posted! And I read it now instead of waiting a very long time to do so! LOL!

Okay, now onto the review... Honestly, I am not surprised that MARS was betrayed. I am also not surprised that Isekai was the true manipulator. But Isekai really did play MARS. Still I am curious to know Isekai plan is. It must be really bad if Hades is terrified.

Now MARS is going to take his anger out on Yuichi. Yeah... When Yuichi is highly motivated like he is (or pissed), then he is going to beat the crap out of him.

But what about Moonlight?! He is still on the loose! Are we going to see more of him? And who is going to defeat him?!

Well, thanks for the read as always! See you next chapter!
Kenshin Kojima chapter 113 . 4/18
I AM NOW FINALLY CAUGHT UP! YES! It was a blast reading all these in one sitting. _

Now onto this chapter... Congrats to Alicia finally defeating a boss! She did it awesomely! And she pulled out a “trump card” too. I am guessing we are going to see more of these “sacred pages”. I dunno. I think Alicia could’ve taken Mao. I mean, she was determined on saving Yuichi.

With Yuichi back in the game... Things are going to good. I cannot wait to see him face off against Mars. I know it’s going to be an intense fight between the two. I cannot wait!

Thanks for the read as always! See you in the next chapter!
Kenshin Kojima chapter 112 . 4/18
Crap! So, that’s why Moonlight is so dangerous. And his connection to the moon weak — yet he was able to still take down Tartarus. And to make matters worse... He now needs to face against his fallen comrades who are now werewolves.

You got this from the second Underworld movie, didn’t you? LOL!

I hope Tartarus can come out of alive. And hopefully someone can Moonlight before he gets fully connected to the moon. But the real question is who can stop him?

Thanks for the read as always! See you at the next chapter!
Kenshin Kojima chapter 111 . 4/18
First off, I would like to say I am amazed you were able to tell them apart. And I am surprised to hear it took you three rewrites before you FINALLY posted this.

Okay, this was a cool fight which could’ve gone either way. I mean... Both them were fighting with the same element. Again, this was a good fight. I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Thanks for the read as always! See you in the next chapter!
Kenshin Kojima chapter 110 . 4/18
Hmm... Well, this was a very interesting chapter. Learned a bit more about Alexander. But this also piqued my curiosity. I want to know about what Fiction was talking about.

I am surprised — but relieved — I want to see the new generation of Reapers and Yuichi handle this. Which I am curious to how this all ends.

Thanks for the read as always! See you in the next chapter!
Kenshin Kojima chapter 109 . 4/18
Sorry it took me so long to review. Now it is time for me to play catch up. And I see I have a few chapters to review. _

Okay, you almost scared me there with Alexander’s death. But I should’ve known he had a trick up his sleeve. I mean, he’s the head of the Pandemonium, after all. And that’s pretty cool ability he has with his grimoire.

Now I didn’t see that happening with Lance. Wow, that was a shocker. It was sad — but it was still shocking. Seriously, I didn’t see that coming. I thought this was good storytelling.

Thanks for the read as always! See you in the next chapter!
hazelnutbrew chapter 15 . 1/27
Well, I read another chapter, and I'm glad it had the ending it had. There's a feeling of completeness about this arc and the fight scenes that you've put in here. But uh oh, I sense an even bigger antagonist than Vincent coming into the works here. But, if Vincent really is dead (for good), good riddance. I mean he's a good antagonist and villain of course, but the fact that he was like "PURGE ALL IMPURITIES" and his overzealous zeal and prejudice against the Human Anomalies and Reapers as like, ugh, the worst. I don't know if there would've been any chance of a redemption arc for him (I do love redemption arcs in shounen and whatnot, but I guess Vincent's end is just as satisfying to be honest) and well, I hope that this story continues on at the good pace that it's going. I loved the little thing at the thing about how Yuichi and Ren are similar to one another, and used the same amount of trickery on the reapers to bring themselves back to life again. I thought that was hilarious. But it sounds like something they would do. Those rascals!

Anyway, I think that this 'emotionless' guy and wanting to be complete was an interesting antagonist setup or something like that. I wonder if he wants to become more human or whatever, or more complete, that he will find the answer that he seeks. Though still, I like that antagonist setup, but he seems pretty scary as well to be honest, maybe even more so than Vincent's overzealous fanaticism about purging Anomalies and Reapers and whatnot. But still, this story is engaging and a very easy read, LOL. I find myself zipping through chapters when I put myself into a mindset or reading and everything. Anyway, you're pretty good at shounen style fight scenes, and I rather enjoyed this chapter. Please continue writing 3
hazelnutbrew chapter 14 . 1/27
Okies, this was an action-packed chapter and I liked the little cat and mouse chase scenario with Vincent and Ren acting as Yuichi's double, but oh my God, that ending was like a gut punch or like a Dementer sucked my soul out of my body. Some part of me thinks that Ren will survive or perhaps become a Human Anomaly like before, or maybe Alicia will keep his soul from crossing over the other side or something like that, but still, what a gut punch ending. I hope that Ren survives or there's a scenario where he can be brought back, because Ren was a fun character, and well, the scene was fun even if it might not be logically plausible. You can take a little artistic license with the reality of the story as long as it fits the tone, and I'm not entirely sure how chemistry works or science does either, I think with the parodic tone of this story, having an explosion in the science lab seems like a cool shounen move that just fits. Rule of Cool and all that, you know. But anyway, I think that you've done a good job portraying the different perspectives, and I hope that Ren survives. I sincerely hope so. I'm getting caught up in all the emotional turmoil and rollercoaster twists. Vincent is absolutely despicable, but I'm not sure if I've seen the end of his depravity and his acts of zealous righteousness.

Ren is a noble character, doing that to protect his friend and avenge his sister, though if this is really the end for him (I don't think it will be, but who knows, maybe this could be an incident where the stakes are raised and Yuichi realizes how important it is to become stronger so he can prevent deaths like his friend Ren from happening or something, I don't know). The thing about this story though, and it's charm, is that it reads just like a manga and anime. I think that you're actually a fine writer, though you say that you're not good at it or 'cud-b-better', but honestly, as one writer to another, especially as a writer that feels self doubts about her work, I think that you're doing a fine job and you've got a lot of adoring fans. Of course, seeing the reviews that you have is impressive, and for good reason-people enjoy the story. So keep on writing, and being true to yourself. Anime/manga is a big inspiration in our storytelling, so make sure to work on the craft and write some more and you'll improve as you go along. Writing a long runner is nothing to sneeze at. I hope you continue with more and I will keep on reading.
hazelnutbrew chapter 13 . 1/25
Okies I had to go through the reviews and see which chapter I reviewed last to continue on this epic story of sorts, and I think the last chapter I reviewed was chapter 12, I see. A lot of the story is fast paced and has nice action and characters to go along with it. It reads just like a manga with the manga and anime archteypes that we adore in our favorite shows and manga and such, which is only natural that this story is up my alley! Though I'm not good at handing out critique, if you're looking for that, because I believe that every story has something to them that will draw an audience towards them and taking away an author's unique fingerprint on a story would only do the author a disservice and dissuade them away from their unique voice. Not that, of course, critique is bad or anything like that, though my advice is to simply to keep on doing what you're doing, because you're obviously doing something right to have so many readers on your story! There's good reason why this is popular, especially with the animesque feel and tone, and omg when I got to Vincent (there's another Vincent I think of too and I HATE HIM and this VINCENT IS JUST TERRIBLE BECAUSE OMG HOW DARE HE WISH TO REMOVE OUR HERO, WHO HE CALLS AN IMPURITY). You've done a good job establishing Yuichi's sympathetic factor (narcissistic he is) and people might say it's overplayed and a little offputting, but I figure, a character doesn't start off perfect and maybe part of his character arc is to learn to trust and help others rather than relying solely focused on himself and his beauty. Though as established earlier, we've seen that he goes to great lengths to protect those he cares about and though he may seem like a little shit when it comes to praising himself and his genius, he's actually got some qualities that make him admirable and he's definitely got one of the most memorable personalities for protags, I've got to say.

Anyway I wanted to thank you for reviewing my story. I know that I should've gotten around to reviewing more of this story and whatnot, but I guess procrastination got the better of me. Haha. Though of course it doesn't mean your story bored me or anything, it's very good and I know there's a reason why it has so many fans, including myself. I just sometimes have a hard time motivating myself to read, though since I decided to write and post more things on Fictionpress, I decided to reciprocate the reviews I've received. I always appreciate comments because then I know what I'm doing right, and what I could do better. When it comes to me reviewing though, I'm just a cheerleader, not the best at giving writing advice or anything like that. So yeah, Vincent is just a horrible person and you've already made us root for Yuichi and thoroughly established Vincent as a villain who is overzealous in 'cleansing the world' of what he believes to be 'impurities' and I think that's a very interesting antagonist to set up. Also the romance between Yuichi and Alicia is entertaining and there's a sort of tension between the two characters that makes their interactions a delight to read, and I'm invested in their relationship. I might review more at another point, when I get a mind to doing it, but thank you so much for your comment :3
Guest chapter 91 . 1/24
Idk why you keep saying you can't write romance. The romance scenes you've made are pretty good.
Kenshin Kojima chapter 108 . 11/8/2020
It’s always good seeing another chapter up! Now onto the review!

Wind against Water. It was a very cool fight. I almost thought Mikoto had the fight won. Actually, I thought she was going to take Sairan with her. It was cool that Sairan managed to push her limits to take Mikoto out. I am just glad that Sairan didn’t die. I mean, just after reuniting with Alicia. It would’ve sucked.

I always said your villains have sad backstories. Mikoto’s was a sad one. Mao and Anzio took the vulnerable Mikoto and warped her. Sad thing is that she thought she was doing the right thing. Sairan called her on it.

Overall, this was a good chapter. Glad that Sairan is still among living. I cannot wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
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