|Reviews for The Old Woman in the Cemetery|
| Bloody Bridgette chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
My, my, my, that was truly chilling. I like the images, and the fact that instead of cheking on the woman right away, Daniel decided to do it later - not sure why, but I found that bit made it all much spookier.
You might have pushed it a little with the 'master' and 'void' thing, I think you could've left it a mystery, but maybe that's just me.
In general, great work, it's hard to find good stories around here ;)
Oh, and I do have an account ( pen name Bloody Bridgette), if you want to reply.