Reviews for Assassin
Max Sorrell chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Wow, intense opening! Curious where the story is going to go from here O_O
Swordy McSwordy chapter 5 . 3/29/2013
Hmm... That makes a good ending for a chapter, but I just don't think it feels... final enough to end the story, even if there is a sequel. It just seems a bit abrupt.
Awesamosa story though, sister!
Swordy McSwordy chapter 4 . 3/29/2013
Ok, the whole perfect timing of the blacksmith was a bit annoying, but the surprise ending made up for it. The bold writing did help the drama, I'll have to use that myself sometime...
Found a few spelling mistakes but nothing TOO bad.
Swordy McSwordy chapter 3 . 3/29/2013
'Make friends with the floor' Hehe. That's going into my list of life mottos...
Also, thanks for the drunken translations!
PS. Did you DRAW that cover? Do you have a deviantArt account?
Swordy McSwordy chapter 2 . 3/29/2013
Yup, still like all the names (which is pretty rare as there are a lot of names I don't like...)

The 'Reaper' name is a bit cliched, but overall I like the story.
When/where is this story set? The swords and scythe are medieval, but Cely (hehe) used a gun, too...
What kinds of things has Cely been fighting that can break a (steel? Some kind of otherworldly metal?) scythe?
Swordy McSwordy chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
Woah. That was an awesamosa beginning...
I don't normally like present tense writing (as I suck at it) but that was great!
The story does seem a bit gothic and dark, but hey, I've wanted to read something like that recently!
All this talk about assassins makes me want to play Assassin's Creed...
PS. I love the names, too!
Paige Terner chapter 5 . 1/29/2013
Paige Terner chapter 4 . 1/29/2013
NOOO! CELESTIA! Stupid Francisco.
Paige Terner chapter 3 . 1/29/2013
Silencers, you gotta admit , are useful: That would be some major pwnage if he heard that and, you know, was alive.
Paige Terner chapter 2 . 1/29/2013
"B-but… you're royalty." Rolando repeated as if to convince himself. There goes his chance, down the dirty, dirty drain.
Does that mean he likes her? Ooooh...
No! Save the Rosenbaum family!
Paige Terner chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Whoa! This guy's sadistic. Shocking, though, to see that he would do that.
Skullface 12-23-1994 chapter 2 . 11/17/2012
I can't help but se this almost as an anime series. At least that is how I picture the scenes and all. I am enjoying this story, but I don't understand why they say. 'For the love of Death.' an you explain please?
Skullface 12-23-1994 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
This was a good chapter, and, I think you have given me something to read for the next coming months. I thank you for introducing this to me Mistress Madness
jakbnimble chapter 3 . 10/30/2012
So action-packed! I feel bad for Celestia and Leonardo, but I was happy to see them beginning to connect at the end of chapter 2.
This is a very cool and frightening world that you've created here!
Kaijeno chapter 3 . 10/30/2012
Really tam this is your project ...but still harass nice one sis
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