|Reviews for Assassin|
| phantom130 5 chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Wow, intense opening! Curious where the story is going to go from here O_O
| Swordy McSwordy chapter 5 . 3/29/2013
Hmm... That makes a good ending for a chapter, but I just don't think it feels... final enough to end the story, even if there is a sequel. It just seems a bit abrupt.
Awesamosa story though, sister!
| Swordy McSwordy chapter 4 . 3/29/2013
Ok, the whole perfect timing of the blacksmith was a bit annoying, but the surprise ending made up for it. The bold writing did help the drama, I'll have to use that myself sometime...
Found a few spelling mistakes but nothing TOO bad.
| Swordy McSwordy chapter 3 . 3/29/2013
'Make friends with the floor' Hehe. That's going into my list of life mottos...
Also, thanks for the drunken translations!
PS. Did you DRAW that cover? Do you have a deviantArt account?
| Swordy McSwordy chapter 2 . 3/29/2013
Yup, still like all the names (which is pretty rare as there are a lot of names I don't like...)
The 'Reaper' name is a bit cliched, but overall I like the story.
When/where is this story set? The swords and scythe are medieval, but Cely (hehe) used a gun, too...
What kinds of things has Cely been fighting that can break a (steel? Some kind of otherworldly metal?) scythe?
I MUST KNOW!
| Swordy McSwordy chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
Woah. That was an awesamosa beginning...
I don't normally like present tense writing (as I suck at it) but that was great!
The story does seem a bit gothic and dark, but hey, I've wanted to read something like that recently!
All this talk about assassins makes me want to play Assassin's Creed...
PS. I love the names, too!
| Paige Terner chapter 5 . 1/29/2013
| Paige Terner chapter 4 . 1/29/2013
NOOO! CELESTIA! Stupid Francisco.
| Paige Terner chapter 3 . 1/29/2013
Silencers, you gotta admit , are useful: That would be some major pwnage if he heard that and, you know, was alive.
| Paige Terner chapter 2 . 1/29/2013
"B-but… you're royalty." Rolando repeated as if to convince himself. There goes his chance, down the dirty, dirty drain.
Does that mean he likes her? Ooooh...
No! Save the Rosenbaum family!
| Paige Terner chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Whoa! This guy's sadistic. Shocking, though, to see that he would do that.
| Skullface 12-23-1994 chapter 2 . 11/17/2012
I can't help but se this almost as an anime series. At least that is how I picture the scenes and all. I am enjoying this story, but I don't understand why they say. 'For the love of Death.' an you explain please?
| Skullface 12-23-1994 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
This was a good chapter, and, I think you have given me something to read for the next coming months. I thank you for introducing this to me Mistress Madness
| jakbnimble chapter 3 . 10/30/2012
So action-packed! I feel bad for Celestia and Leonardo, but I was happy to see them beginning to connect at the end of chapter 2.
This is a very cool and frightening world that you've created here!
| Kaijeno chapter 3 . 10/30/2012
Really tam this is your project ...but still harass nice one sis