Reviews for My Dysfunctional Life
balloonfista chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Oh my God! This poem was just...so...angsty. It made me so sad and from the beginning, the deep emotions in it made me feel as if it was something you've really experienced which you confirmed at the end :(

"A broken shell, a tattered clasp," - I loved this phrase, and really appreciate the way you rhymed everything up so perfectly! (I can NOT write a poem and so appreciate it even more in others, lol)

P.S. Is there a specific reason you used 'thru' instead of 'through'? To me, it just sounds kinda informal while through sounds more serious. But this is just an opinion so you can ignore it if you want :P

Ri x
Krisbabe chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
I also have a dysfunctional family dynamic but with my father's hates me for no cause and treats my father's nephew as her only curse that woman.
Lann Melvory chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Alaeryel, you are one fantastic poet! I can actually feel your frustration and resolution regarding the issue. Keep up the good work! :D
Felrain chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Very emotional, great job an I live the style.