Prei! what happened to her?

Hmm...furry shadows? Interesting...I'm so curious as to what they could be :) good job on the chapter! _

Wolfy

This is shorter than the other chapters, but I still like it!
The fluffy things sound cute!

Also, in this sentence I think you mean two, not too:
No too were alike, but none of them seemed particularly threatening.

Please keep writing!

0.0 poor people!

I LOVED this story...
I'm waiting for an update!
:)

0.o Wow, I would hate living like that! DX There is not possible way I could do the same thing over and over again every single day for the rest of my life! That'd torture me...
This chapter was very descriptive, and beautiful sounding though. I like it a lot!
I wonder what the Arena thing is. It sounds interesting. Please update soon!
I'll be looking forward to it!

I decided to read one of your stories, because you read mine. :)
This is really good! It easily caught my interest.
But there were some things that confused me.
This sentence:
Vibrant purples, intense yellows and brilliant blues burst painfully against my eyes as I tumbled down into the darkness.
Made me confused. There are a bunch of bright colors, then you say that she/he is falling into darkness. Then you continued talking about the colors.
Maybe you could put a little more, and take somethings out so you don't leave the reader wondering too much.
But overall I liked this prologue, and I'm going to continue with this!

Ooh, I'm all curious now...this seems quite good. Can't wait to see more :)

Wolfy

So now I'm hooked. I have no idea what happened or what's going to happen and I want to know.

It's very short and yet not too short, because it's well written.

I'm looking forward to reading the first chapter.