Reviews for A Wish's Beholder
D. Cowman chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
I really REALLY enjoyed the bit about the wizard wringing out his hat. That made me chuckle from some endless summer within me.

And, I was satisfied by the ending, in a strange way. Lets just say that I expected as much.
msh2000 chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
OH MY GOSH how do you write like this? I mean, in the beginning I knew there would be a wonderful ending with a thought-provoking moral- and instead you left it to us to make it ourselves: I love this knew way to write fairy tales, it was amazing, 400 words or not, AMAZING.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
That good things don't necessarily come to those who deserve them, but to the people with the most influence and power.
It's quite sad.
thecheshirewold
Luckycool9 chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
I felt the wish was given to the wrong person... the poor girl will still cry since she has no money while the snotty princess will still get whatever she wants. So tragic,it refelcts today's society much so.