Reviews for A Bittersweet Romance so True
whiteyachts chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
i'm definitely interested to see where you will take this story & these characters, i think it has the potential of being something really good. i might only suggest to develop the sentences or thoughts a bit more, sometimes they felt a little choppy or not as fully thought out. i'm kind of confused about why paige was described as having an aching heart after matthew expressed his feelings for her when it didn't seem as if he was hurt/offended when she didn't reciprocate so i'm not sure what she is really thinking. it felt a little odd just to jump from that major disclosure to asking if he wanted to come over and have cake too. i hope that this is helpful/constructive. i look forward to another update!
XxLiViNgZoMbEeXx chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Awhhh this is so sweet TWT It reminds me of a Matthew I used to know a while back...Still does actually...

Hope you write more soon! X3