Reviews for The Eye
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
This is absolutely beautiful - intense imagery and a brilliant ending. I especially loved the lines "Nothing but an empty void of vibrant colour/nothing to see but what meets the eye."

Once again, fabulous work :D
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
An interesting take on the eye, I liked the way the descriptions were formed and the images you conjournes were brilliant. I found the line lengths a little erratic and it might work better as a piece if it was in stanzas. If you were to read it aloud after writing you will be able to see any parts that do not work. Great job though, please keep writing.
Starry-eyed Starfish chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
It was magical :3
Very beautiful and intriguing :)




Naver chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Wow. I like your take on eyes. It was very alluring and descriptive, a true master piece. Continue writing. :)