Reviews for Common Fools
Valenteen chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
I love your poems- the short ones are particularly effective. I love the line 'pulling knots, creating strings', especially because of the slight play on words- there is a thing called a love knot. Well done with this, and keep writing!
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Very well done, you create such wonderful imagery with your work. A vary interesting piece.
DarkInkyDreamer chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Beautiful and thought provoking as always. Well done!

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The Moon Howls At The Wolf chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Great poem! Very Victorian in language choice and immagery. I lie as well as dislike (for who wants to think that our actions are controlled by anyone who is not us) the idea of the puppertmaster. Keep writing!
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
I really like this piece :-) the imagery is beautiful and the piece very relatable because love makes us all fools! Brilliant piece as always! :-D
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
This is beautiful. I love the first two lines, I think they're brilliant. I like the imagery you create with the puppeteer, and the lark in the morning, it's done very well. Nice piece! :)
Naver chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
I love your work. I'm an inspired fan of yours AppleCrumble. (You are forever one of my favorite authors.)