Reviews for Rivera |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved these last two chapters! :D Bad smutty-brain... but omg, i loved these so much! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ehhhhhh? Where is man update !? Δ |
![]() ![]() I love it! And I can't wait for the next chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for letting us know. I am looking forward to the next installment. Bring on the sexy goodness! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "'I like you, so much.' And that was all it took to break Hiro's control." That's where you decided to leave off!? blarg Anyways, about Alec's secret. I thought it was pretty cool. Some people write stuff and they either build up the character to have the most amazing powers ever, and then they don't (extreme letdown) While others just drop a giant bomb where their character can fly and crush through walls, and they are super smart, and have every other super power imaginable! But this, this was good. Not some crazy unbelievable thing, but not a giant letdown. Right in the middle. And I personally like those ones the best. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Could this be the secret mentioned in the summary? Or at least part of it. It just has to be! And Alec making demands? This just keeps getting more interesting by the line! And just a bit of a side note, but would there possibly be any connection between Hiro, and an actual hero? Maybe his is, *dramatic pause* Alec's hero!? Anyways, Happy Holidays and New Year! And good luck with school and all that jazz. I go back tomorrow. :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Helpless Alec was pretty cute, though. But I guess I'll just have to wait for you connect the dots. So good luck with Microsoft Word and enjoy break! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooo! ur ending soon? this is a really good story. i can't wait for the next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ending soon?! But, but... Well, that was, surprising, to say the least. I didn't know that Alec could take down a demon by himself. I didn't think he was completely helpless, but still. A demon? And now all I want is for Hiro to get back, and see that Alec isn't just some pushover. Loved the chapter and express train into Alec's mind. :) *thumbs up* |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was just waaayyy too hilarious. Alec, being the one in charge? I like it! And of course, I must bring up the plot. Just guessing, but there is some huge connection between Rivera and Alec's sister... Not exactly sure what or how yet... So keep writing so that I can find out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Secretly, we all want Hiro to call Alec 'mother' again XD Great chapter, love how playful it is :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing... me lovey! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's like when the best friend meets the new girlfriend, only the girlfriend isn't super mean. Al was hilarious, and the fact that he likes Alec is amazing. I've always heard stories about how the GF doesn't like any of her BF's friends, or that the bestie and the GF have a power struggle over who gets the see (in this case, Hiro) more often. I've no clue if that is true or not, though... Hiro is waaayyyyyy too cute to/with Alec. He always is over reacting about the small things. And him and Alec are super cute with each other; they are both nice and there isn't any power struggle to see who gets to decide what they do for the day and the such. Anyways, I hope your house gets painted better this time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly think this is an amazing story. Yeah, a lot of it is fluff, but it still isn't too much, you know? There is enough of other things to keep it interesting. All in all, I love Hiro and Alec together, even if it is sad that Alec can't see his family. And, enter the crazy ex. Well, I guess she's a bit more than an ex, but still. Anyways, thank you for sharing this, even if you think it can be cheesy at times. I believe it isn't too cheesy though... So, enjoy your day! And keep writing, because I love it! |