Reviews for The Thought Counts
CJoyrun chapter 4 . 11/23/2012
Hey, you're profile says you aren't good at poetry but I like these! I like how you've interconnected them. Is there going to be more? It'd be cool if you could connect the last one to the first to make a circle. :)
nothing rhymed chapter 4 . 11/18/2012
your agility in personification is pretty much dumbfounding by now.
"And I think of the wind and how it sees what I do:" a truth so somberly told.
my favorite besides the first chapter.
nothing rhymed chapter 3 . 11/17/2012
love this story and your format even more, just to see how it's progressing.
zombsigner chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
Hhhmmm where are the pink-
Oh i see the pink clouds of dawn/dusk
zombsigner chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Keep goin' frankie.
nothing rhymed chapter 2 . 10/31/2012
a beautiful reprise.
nothing rhymed chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
this is seriously good. please forgive me for finding it hard to explain why, but this is the best poem i've read in months. short and sweet but so wholly meditative and wondrous with feeling.
so this is what speechlessness feels like.