Reviews for Fighting Corruption
Daisy02 chapter 3 . 11/16/2012
Ah what a great story! It had me nervous for a second there,
Just few spelling errors. It would be good to spice things up more so to speak, use more description to really get the reader to feel the emotion and was a good idea Gwen had. The characters were very likable. I would be happy to see a more build up story line for it, some more dialogue friends, school life, drama, action and all that. But I think it is fine the way it is also. So to some it all up I loved it!
Daisy02 chapter 2 . 11/16/2012
OH THANK GOODNESS! She knows where to get the proof! I was worried for a second there...
I love the brother and father, nah the whole family so protective very cute
Daisy02 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
Whoa, at first I didn't expect Gwen to be a girl, which is strange of me. I can't believe this happened! It's crazy, what a great story, I need to read more...