Reviews for The Trigger
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
I liked the reoccurance of 'Sometimes it takes'. Its strange what triggers sadness and memories. You kept this piece simple and it's more emotional and better for it. The flow was brilliant and concluded with the perfect and true ending, which makes the peace more sad.
Brilliant.
Naver chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
You are very talented, I really enjoy your poetry.. Continue to write.:)
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
This is very true. It reminds me of when I was clearing out my bedroom (ready to decorate it) and I came across a photo of my old dog (she passed away) and I know it might not seem the same. But I just sat there with the picture in my hand crying.

Anyway, this is a really nice poem and the words just say it all. I think it's the kind of poem that makes other people focus on there triggers rather than focus on a character's triggers. I loved the flow which really lead to a nice conclusion because this poem is so realistic and true that I think everyone should read it.
True Talker chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
This makes me think of things. It really does.