Fantastic story! I love how the characters are introduced, and I want to learn more about all of them. All the guy characters sound AWESOME, and frankly if I went to her school my eyes would be permanently glued to Dean's face. Dakota is a bit hard to relate to, however. I mean- saying NOTHING to the hottest guy ever? And him still talking to her? This girl must be drop dead gorgeous or something. I wish guys would follow me around after completely ignoring them. Anyway, great story! I love the sarcasm and mature writing, and it seems like you're having fun with it, which is important because it's fun to read! WRITE 100 MORE CHAPTERS. NOW.
-Amanda

hahah loved this chapter update asap! :D

Um, I want more. This is friggin' hilarious, bro.

Ha. Dean, obviously you have to high of an ego. Gosh. :3

3 so funny keep it up!

Hahaha i really really liked this chapter it was great :D

haha lol. i liked this chapter :D

haha my panties arnt in a bunch yet ;) but id like to hear more to see where this story go and get to know the characters and all that jazz. good job on the prologue though :)