Reviews for Amazing |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZINGG! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, I love the ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() Urgh story of my life...though I'm not /that/ quiet, *sigh* hope it works out too :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this story...aaah I can't ...it's amazing...scratch that...it's better than amazing. It's so good that there is no adjective good enough to describe it! |
![]() ![]() Okay, that was very good! I'm just as shy as TJ, and I'm telling you, she's very well characterised! And Terra as well! I love the very beginning because it's sooo like me a few years ago and I think that you portrayed TJ's personality very well. The only thing that I don't like is that she keeps running away, which is basically nonsense because Terra had it all arranged for her! Anyway, it was fun reading, so good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() adorable, seriously so so so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! :) Super cute! I can't wait to read the epilogue to Merboy! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS. WAS. SO. ADORABLE. Erm, except for all those times TJ ran away when really all she had to say was like "Hi" or "Yes" or "No" or something. Cuz I mean I used to be shy but really, TJ is just being ridiculous. Anyways. It was still superrrr cute and I love the ending! :D There were some spelling errors and stuff, probably typos, but there were also a few random tense changes that I don't think should've been there. I'm too lazy to scroll back up and point out every mistake I caught, but I think it would be good if you went back and edited this because it's so good but the little mistakes here and there just kinda poke at me as I'm reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is adorable! So adorable... ;] |