|Reviews for Awake|
| Kurthulhu chapter 2 . 11/8/2012
Okay, I really like your story alot, and critiquing it is enabling me see some things in my own writing that is helping me a great deal, so... bear with me, please. I will PM my comments from this point forward, because I will be going in to some plot elements that you might want to use to surprise your other readers.
| scoobford chapter 2 . 11/1/2012
Very awesome...good work!
| Kurthulhu chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
A good beginning! Marley seems bright, which of course she would be... but there is something about her thought process when her mother is bringing her to the sleep chambers... Marley doesn't seem to be afraid of what is going on, really. If we are in her head, so to speak, it seems to me that she wouldn't be thinking of what was going on, or maybe even know that bombsand meteors are dropping from the sky.
Makes me want to read more. Keep it up!
| Bluesparks chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Wow, this really got me interested! It sort of reminds me of a dream I once had. Anywho, great job! Update soon please