|Reviews for OC's Needed! Superheroes|
| hotwinglover chapter 6 . 2/9/2013
Wow. They've been in Alaska so long, I forgot why they were there.
| Reid D chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Real Name: Allen Nadir
Hero Name: Ice Allen or I.A.
Appearance: boy-cut raven hair, onyx black eyes, pale skin
Hero Costume: black combat boots, black tights, fingerless gloves, metallic belt, black cape
Powers: dark matter... Cool strength
Personality: Gothic, Tomboy-ish, punk, emo
History: I became a villain because I was brainwashed, and grew up to believe that everyone that lives in the world are my enemies. I always get flashbacks of my real past, but still, I ignore them.
Death: It depends on how you like it to be.. As long as it would be tragic after the moment that I find out about every single truth.
Other: I hate light and girly colors, 15 yrs. old, fond of scaring people at school
Thanks though for this.. I always liked to be part of a story, and somehow I found this opportunity. It'll be ypur job how to put me in your story, so keep up with updating this story.! :)
| InvaderZamGar chapter 6 . 2/8/2013
Man why do I have to be singled out by the Unkiller, I mean I'm sure you have a great plot point in mind but now the suspense is gonna kill me.
Anyways, great chapter and even though it's short it still reads real easy like always. Just make sure the procrastination gremlins don't get you, they're the death of all stories. Well them and The Writers Block that is.
| CynicalSquid chapter 5 . 1/18/2013
Sorry I haven't reviewed, yet. I've been busy (translation: I got lazy, even though I read the chapter I didn't want to type anything). But, regardless, I'm reviewing now. I got over my cold shortly after last time you updated :) ...Only to go back to school and catch another one 1 or 2 weeks later. Stoopid immune system :/ And I have two more heroes in the back of my mind. I'll send them whenever I can :)
Hmm, that's a specific weakness. Makes me kinda curious. BUT SERIOUSLY, WTF DID YOU DO LAST CHAPTER THERE, JOE-BEAR (is "Joe-Bear" from something? I swear I've heard it somewhere)? YOU PULLED A ROPE AND CAUSED AN AVALANCHE. ONLY YOU, JOE-BEAR.
LUMINA'S ALIVE! YAY!
...Hmmm...Well, Azazel, I think we'd all like to met this friend.
Uh-huh, an "accident", right, Patrick? ;) But geez (I say that a lot...geez, I need to stop that), you're gonna end up with some kind of brain damage, aren't you, Patty?
OMFG, LALAN. AZAZAZAZ...You know what? I'll call him Zazzy. ZAZZY, WHERE IS SHE?!
Sorry, I'm a little hyper today.
| InvaderZamGar chapter 5 . 1/5/2013
I read the word "accidentally" and scoffed inwardly, never is the an accidental breast touch
| Schwan chapter 5 . 1/4/2013
Flu sucks. I'm over mine and I hope you get over yours soon too. I have no idea how you can write when your sick. I could never do that. XD
Anyways, great chapter. I just read over all five chapters (cuz I felt like it) and to me it seems like your detailing has gotten better. Again, it wasn't absolutely horrible before, but I DO think it has gotten better.
And once more, I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors.
Keep up the good work and update soon please!
| hotwinglover chapter 5 . 1/4/2013
Nice. Understandable and nice. And the poll for this story' s down. Oh, and everybody, don't forget to read Shouta's brand new stories The Apocalypse: Your POV and Beast Bomb! Really good!
| Samurai Wolverine chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Real Name: Cole Kent
Hero Name: Stinglash
Appearance: Cole has dark tan exoskeleton thats bonded to his skin and the only part of his skin that's showing is his face. Has light blue eyes and naturally pale skin.
Hero Costume: None, unless Cole's exoskeleton is counted as one
Powers: Increased strength and to an extent speed, almost invulnurable due to the exoskeleton, able to produce most types of venom, poisons, and toxins (including kinds to heal) from his tail, claw like fingers and toes
Personality: Cole is the type that hold grudges without that person knowing it or lash out if angered or to defend himself or those in need. He also tends to be kind to anyone who helps or is kind to him.
History: Cole comes from a family that travels in the desert more often than orthers and was exposed to many forms of venoms that he bult up a high resistance to them, as well as toxins and poisons. Cole was in an explosion that mutated him by fusing him with a desert scorpion and robbed him of his memorise and his family
Other: Has near total amesia
| Kittykatking chapter 4 . 12/30/2012
This was a good chapter
| T.N.M.M.Q chapter 4 . 12/28/2012
Joey is most likely dead. Then if he is an alternative comes to mind (I'm not saying you should do this just puttin' it out there) some one could bring him back to life but it erased his memory and now they trick him into evil or maybe just the ameisa part without dieing or maybe he discovered the Unkiller or his minions or lair or sumthin and is captured unknown to readers and other heros until farther into the story.
| Schwan chapter 4 . 12/27/2012
Another wonderful chapter. I liked this chapter more than the last one (but don't worry, there wasn't anything horribly wrong with the last one). Nice action scene too. And as you probably know, I loved the last part. I didn't see any spelling or grammar errors!
That's so weird! I came down with the flu on Christmas Eve too! I've had it ever since!
Well, anyways, great chapter! Keep up the good work! I'm going to submit a villian as soon as I get the chance.
Update soon please!
| CynicalSquid chapter 4 . 12/26/2012
Lolol, Lumina's prank was perfect xD Joey's scolding was DEFINITELY useless xD
Oh Patrick, you and your whining...be careful or I'm gonna start calling you Bieber.
Sheeeeeeeit. What'd you do, Joey?!
A damn good song indeed. I knew their (um, her? God, idk if it's a band or a singer, but either way, ftw) song Seven Devils already...I think she's going to end up one of my favourites. .
I have a cold, too. It's my third one since September. I don't see anyone as out of character at the moment. I've gotten inspiration for two more villains, recently. I'll PM you their forms when I get the chance :)
| TheFlameBlade chapter 4 . 12/26/2012
I can't wait till shadow night comes back.
| hotwinglover chapter 4 . 12/26/2012
This is just the beginning of the Alaska joirney.
Too bad about you getting sick, I got sick on the day before Christmas Eve! Might have the flu... Its been going around...
| account died chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
I hope you don't have so much superheroes you can't accept mine :)
Real Name: Lianne (Lees or Lia) Minaver
Hero Name: ... I don't have an idea for that...
Appearance: Wavy golden-blond hair that is tied back, but with a few strands framing her face. She have a fair share of freckles. Her eyes are different coloured, because Tibbles happened to be a Khao Manee, with green and blue eyes. She retained the green left eye, and her right eye was originally blue, so yeah... Lia is a shortie :D
Hero Costume: Casual clothes-white long-sleeved top and tight jeans that hug her legs, but are still comfortable enough and not so restricting that she can't do a split.
Powers: The ability to "move" her essence (or spirit, conscious etc) into living things within 7 meters of her. Her actual body disintegrates when she does this, and when she returns from the foreign body, her body reforms. She can access the body of any living things, whether they're one-celled, or a tree. (She doesn't like to become a bacteria, because the damage she could cause is slow-reacting since cancer, tumors and stuff like that don't instantly become apparent.) While in a tree, for example, she can make it grow thorns, turn it's leaves into razor sharp projectiles and use its roots to attack. However, Lia can only do this for 20 minutes before the ability supressing the original organism's "essence"(conscious, etc) disappears, and she can get overwhelmed. In very strong willed humans, she can only do this for three minute or a bit more, but in most humans, she can do it for 10 minutes or so.
When she enters another body, she will instinctively know how long she can stay in the body, right down to the milliseconds. She can also access the memory of the organism.
Personality: A little spoilt, and things must (very preferably) go her way. Lia does care about those she loves, and would extract revenge from those that dare harm them. She's really graceful and no one can tell her what to do that easily. She's independent and hard to get wound-up.
History (include why you became hero/villain/etc): She comes from a very rich family. Her dad knows of her abilities and love her dearly, but her friends didn't, and their mean words and actions hurt her pretty bad, so she decided that she wouldn't help despicable people like those and turned bad.
When she first found her powers, she accidently went into the body of her cat, Tibbles (please don't comment on the name XP), freaked out, and got stuck in the body for a little short of an hour. When she does return into her own body, she retained some cat-characteristics, like hissing at people when she's mad at them, able to jump from really high areas and survive the falls, (she can jump from the ninth storey of a building and survive, but that's the max).
Death?: If it helps (:
Sorry for the really, really, really long powers bit "_