Reviews for The Right Thing |
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marginal-utility chapter 7 . 11/13/2012 How could he find a moment to do the things to Jacob he wanted to if Carmen and Marcel were there with him? How indeed? Occupational hazard of being a single parent. |
marginal-utility chapter 6 . 11/11/2012 Erika has terrible timing. |
TiltingAtWindmills chapter 6 . 11/10/2012 This story is, dare I say it, kick-ass! I love the characters, you write each of them believably and well. Jenny wasn't a bitch about the divorce (although the 20 some odd year brick to the face divorce was kind of messed up), which is a nice change considering how the soon-to-be ex-wife is usually portrayed. Daniel and Jacob? Love 'em! Carmen is so cute, and Marcel is...Marcel. The detail is awesome too, and the pacing is great. Thank you for writing this, please continue! |
marginal-utility chapter 5 . 11/9/2012 Daniel does not seem to be anywhere near acknowledging his sexuality,let alone admitting to others, and Jacob of course is not going to be anyone's dirty little secret, so its gonna be a long ride. |
Midnights Scream chapter 5 . 11/8/2012 woah. this is amazing. I just got sucked in and then I got to this chapter and was like 'where's the rest of it? I want to read more'. I really like Jacob he seems like a good guy and I like how his mind works. Poor Daniel with having to figure out how to handle kids on his own and his whole vague sexual confusion. I will admit I would like to read some thought process on how he's been married for so long to Karen when he watches gay porn. Is he bi is he is indenial gay? How'd they meet and when had they started to fade? Lots of questions about Daniel, but very good job. can't wait for more :D |
DarksideOfTheMoon342 chapter 5 . 11/8/2012 Daniel is an idiot! But Carmen is just so cute! |
LeaveThePieces chapter 4 . 11/4/2012 Very interested! |
The Infinity chapter 4 . 11/4/2012 OMFG. NEED UPDATES. LOVE THIS. |
marginal-utility chapter 4 . 11/4/2012 Great, they are making progress :) |
DarksideOfTheMoon342 chapter 4 . 11/4/2012 I like how u kno how to make ur characters flirt. not every author is like that. Sum people rush to the nitty-gritty. |
DarksideOfTheMoon342 chapter 3 . 11/3/2012 I like it! |
marginal-utility chapter 3 . 11/3/2012 Never knew parent teacher meetings could have so much sexual tension LOL |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/1/2012 Jacob should waste no time in hitting on Daniel. They both could use some loving :) |
marginal-utility chapter 1 . 10/31/2012 Good chapter. I wonder who Jacob Blixt is. |