Reviews for The Day We Gave In
Mr. Review chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
This is the best thing I have ever read. The choice of words used to describe boring objects in your room really conjures up a scene, for example, the "wood" bookcase.

The alliteration in the phrase "passionate perfection" made me spit out my milkshake. You might say I am passionate about passion and the perfection is perfect!

The fact that you are comfortable with your nudity made me want to take my clothes off more. You are an inspiring girl...

When he "poured himself" into you, my stomach was doing somersaults and there was a tear in my eye! The language put me in mind of an old English tea set. I couldn't sleep for days.

I have read this aloud to my friends over three times and they love it almost as much as I do! You are really talented. If you post more stuff like this, I will consider buying your book (Dare to Dream by Sarah Jane Callaway)

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Tyana Barnes chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
you are now my number one author! anyone who likes Ed Sheeran is the best!