Reviews for Clover |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this :) Maybe Evan should've waited longer before figuring out... could've lent to the drama.. but oh well! Loving it :D -Pixie |
![]() ![]() ![]() THAT WAS A LOVELY STORY! Seriously. It was amazing and I loved it. Most slash I read ends up being 20% story and 80% erect dick. This truly was awesome. I don't have enough words in the English language to describe how I feel. c: |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY! God, they're both so stubborn! XP |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yaoi manga is the second best thing in the world. The first being World of Warcraft. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eeep. I like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this fic a lot, I found it very sweet and I loved how Evan fought for Sascha trust and love :) a wonderful write! |
![]() ![]() Hello! I waited sooooo long for your update, never really being able to forget about your story and have always been coming back from time to timr throughout the year to check for updates. It has been an amazing read and I do hope you get better! You make people happy with your stories :)))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Just pull our heartstrings! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *a single manly tear cascades down my flushed cheek.* Author, for the time I read this story, I was deeply in love with it. I understand that it's dead, now, but... I will ALWAYS LOVE YOUUUUU! Thank you for the good times. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed, I cried, I occasionally yelled at the computer, and I nearly jumped out of my seat when I read that there is a sequel! I'm about to read that right now! GREAT, GREAT, GREAT STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really sweet start. It's a little slow paced, but somehow that kind of works and I'm looking forwards to reading the rest, thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this was some evening. I had retired from reading/writing on Fiction Press years ago and on a whim today, came back. Even more by chance, stumbled across this story and it just seemed to jump out, so I thought, "oh why not, let's give the first chapter a try." Sixteen chapters later, my eyes have glossed over from sitting in front of my computer screen and refusing to move for hours. This was an incredibly cute, sweet and fun story and I applaud you! I literally could NOT stop reading because you, as an author, were such a tease, that to not find out if Sascha would ever get with Evan was simply not an option. I was extremely, emotionally invested in this story, it was a little ridiculous. I could understand Sascha's desire and hesitation and it read like authentic, complex emotions that can so easily be portrayed as black or white, not this lovely shade of gray that you gave us. But I was also able to relate to Evan and see how he was changing as a person. The frustration they felt for each other and their situation was making ME frustrated, which is a great accomplishment for you! More than once I most certainly grumbled angry words at my computer when a situation didn't end how my lovey-dovey heart wanted it to. I also really liked Jason's character and I hope he continues to be his sneaky self in the sequel. I'm also interested in Miles, wondering if he will play a bigger role in the sequel? Will he be for or against my babies? No one touch Sascha and Evan! I went through so much to see them get together! Again, job well done, a fantastic read and I enjoyed my evening thoroughly because of this gem! I'm hitting up the sequel as soon as my eyes get a break. Can't wait to see more from you! -C.S. Poe |
![]() ![]() This is soooooooooo beautiful! This story is my favorite out of this whole site. I cant stress how perfect this is. Your writting and how you drew me in. Considering its 3:54 in the morning and i still want to read more! ou shoud consider being a professional writter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this!i really do! thanks so much for this! |
![]() ![]() Your story is exceptionnaly cute! Your characters are deep, your writing style is soft and refreshing and the intrigue is nicely slow. I love it, please keep writing! |