|Reviews for The Youngest Malone (NaNo 2012)|
| CheckerboardBunny chapter 26 . 4/1/2018
Awesome story! Dom was the best! XD
| SlytherinLyn chapter 22 . 2/5/2017
Aaand this chapter moved me to tears. And I don't do crying. Wow, you're an amazing writer.
| Halden Park chapter 18 . 5/1/2015
I was reduced to sniffling pathetically into my sleeve by the end of this chapter. Great story so far, I love it.
| anon chapter 26 . 4/23/2015
i just found this story and wanted to say thank you. i don't think i have ever identified with a character as much as i have with alexa. i too am from a dysfunctional family whose insanity and mishaps rival the malones and have long played the role of trying to fix everyone else's problems as a way of not dealing with my own. i also avoid relationships for fear of being hurt especially because i have no immediate examples of a healthy romantic relationship. to hear what sometimes feels like a solitary journey echoed somewhere even in fiction means a lot and gives me hope that even though none of the relationships around me have worked that maybe its possible for me to have one.
| Prince Duckling chapter 26 . 2/21/2015
Awwwwwww... I loved this story so much. :,( I hope you write more about the Malones someday.
| scattering the wind chapter 26 . 1/16/2015
It's been an amazing ride, reading this story. I love Malone family story, and dearly ship and fangirl over Alexa and Dom and Wil and Doug...and I heart Matt and Andy so much. Thank you so much for writing this.
I'll definitely be checking out your new/old stories. :)
| Dani chapter 25 . 1/7/2015
I think it never hurts to try and there is a first time for everything so I say go for it! Try to write a story through a boy's perspective.
| color outside the lines chapter 24 . 10/30/2014
Ah, so many feelings about this chapter. c:
| color outside the lines chapter 23 . 9/7/2014
Please continue the story! c:
| n0vad0se chapter 23 . 8/27/2014
I've just finished reading this at 04:22 in the morning and I have to be up at seven to make a doctor's appointment. I'm literally going to get less than three hours sleep because of this story so thank you very much! In all seriousness, though, so far it's been extremely well written and I obviously haven't been able to stop reading it until there was nothing left to read. I very much hope you update soon but hopefully at a time when I've either had more sleep or have the opportunity to gain more sleep afterwards!
I have a few questions surrounding Dominic's family however as you gave two different background stories that I'm not sure link or cancel out each other. So as far as I understand Dom's mother had a daughter with another man, who grew up with her father's family? Then Dom's dad died and his mother couldn't stand looking at him and became a drug addict somewhere along the way before sending him to live with his paternal grandparents? Then she met a guy on the Internet and had some kids with him? From what I've read this is the general story I have for him but I'm not sure if it's what you've intended - if not then please clear it up for me, please, please, please.
I think I'll get some sleep now as my eyes hurt like hell. Good story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
| Sparks04 chapter 23 . 8/7/2014
I can't even begin to explain the disappointment I felt when I realized that I'd reached the last available chapter. I was so engaged in the story that I didn't even realize I'd read all 23 chapters in an hour!
Really well written- I love the dynamics if the characters and how each is so different yet similar. You make them seem realistic and I love that!
| Robbie chapter 23 . 6/25/2014
Please update? I check every day to see if you updated and every time you didn't I was crushed...:(
| rememberholly chapter 23 . 6/18/2014
Mucho cute chapter! AND MATT'S BACK! (whoohoo, I just rhymed. I'm awesome. XD) AND THE CUP THAT DOM GAVE ALEXA! (why can't I have a boyfriend like that...) Dom's the sweetest guy, and Lex and him deserve happiness from the earth to infinity and back.
| Lily chapter 23 . 6/16/2014
Awww...This is such a great chapter...Dom and Lex are the perfect couple! *cue fangirl scream* And Matttyyy! I love him! Awesome job, Brit! Update soon please!?
| Julia Wittenberg chapter 23 . 6/11/2014
pleeeeeeeeaaaaseeee update?! I'm dddyyyiiinnngggg for the next chappptteeerr! IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOOOOOONNNN my death will be upon your hands! XD I'm applying to the author part in you that doesn't want to rip the readers heart out, pleeeaassseee?!