Loved this story!

i read this story and i kinda couldn't fight the butterfilies from forming in my stomach sometimes! it was very sweet but sometimes i found there was too much PDA!i can say saunti's not really my type! too cheesy for me seriously!
i liked how you showed how friendship was important! and! i fell in love with vince! 3
(can't wait for his story and dacota's in uni! )

That's so adorable I'm sad this story is over but there is still thunder

You're stories are amazing and soo cute! You are really good at writing :)

Hi! I love your story, and I would like to print it and keep it so I have it after it's not on FictionPress any more. But I can't highlight it to copy and paste it so I can't save it to print it. Can you please send it to me through a PM? That would be awesome. BTW, I love your other story, Thunder, too.

Great story. I really enjoyed it

So I played drops of Jupiter on my phone while I read along. Can I just say.. Magical! I wish you had finished that part though. The boys stopped playing but there was still a bit left to the song. Other than that though. Beautiful :)

So.. for the most part, the dialogue was decent and the characters had good personalities. But, I must say.. there were a few things about this that just reeeally bothered me. I felt like the smoking thing was kind of..stupid. Like, I would understand her getting upset if he were like, doing hardcore drugs, maybe.. but that was seriously just awful. And then there were a few times where the dialogue was too lovey for my taste. However, overall, I liked the basic storyline. Okay. That's all.

I'm not even kidding, I love love love this story. It's amazing! Now, moving onto the sequel...

This entire story was so fluffffffffy, I think I'm gonna die! Lol totally loved it! Great job!

One of my favorite songs, Iris! I had actually thought of that song immediately when I read the title of this story haha

Okay, so I know I'm reading this story way after you've finished. But I just had to ask a question. Why would a club that's "teens only" be serving alcohol? I could see if they had used fake I.D.s to sneak into a regular club and been served alcohol. But being that it was for teens, it doesn't seem to make sense that they could get it there.

Anyway, I'm on my way to reading this entire story and loving it so far!

Elmo?

i came across this story and I am SO obsessed with it! I'm now moving on to the sequel. :)

They are so adorable, it's heartbreaking