I'm very curious to see what happens next; I hope you update soon!

Interesting story, please continue.

let's see where this is going

Hey,

Well ... um ... interesting...

First, I only noticed a couple of typos/word choice issues. Small point that didn't hinder the readability of the story.

Second, a couple of story line/plot line questions:

That must have been one hell of a 'shot' to almost totally remove Megan's inhibitions ... (sci fi so, fine)
You had a comment about her escape attempt, but that seemed to indicate that the 'shot' didn't totally inhibit her resistance to the situation. A bit of a dichotomy... was a 'booster' needed to keep her 'focused' because there was a wearing off of the affect?

Do you plan on explaining how this society reproduces currently? You have some vague comments, but... given the reactions of Kia and Maya, it must be very difference. However, the concern about Megan getting pregnant seemed to mean that the method couldn't be too much different?

I'm guessing that some level of emotional romance will develop between Megan and Jack?

I thought the 'Bones' fan fiction ladies could write smut, but you are certainly their equal.

Continue, and I will follow.

John

interesting.. :)

Oh man now we know the beginning of it all! This is a great plot you have come up with for your stories. I remember when I first started reading your stories and to finally here about their history and what they are it feels surreal. Lol They just want to have sex...is that so bad lol? I really hope they all get a happy ending.

Intriguing start.