No problem! XD I think I speak for all of us when I say "we're always here to help!" Correct me if I'm wrong. :)

Thanks for mentioning me here! I'll definitely go check out the other book. Good job on this one.:)

Wait wait wait...ROSE DIED?

Yay! XD Glad to see you're still alive and writing! Two things. One: check some of the spelling. (Just a few words, nothing more. And for their family names I don't think you need the apostrophe.) Two: Maybe you shouldn't rush things too much. I kinda felt like you were during the previous chapters. Take your time. Also, I KNEW IT! I KNEW THAT NOTE WAS FOR HER! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!

Even fewer! XD Anyways, good work, as always. :) (I'm starting to run out of things to say LOL. )

A few mistakes, sometimes with punctuation and grammar. But overall it was fine and understandable. I suggest a bit more proofreading though. And adding lines between changes in character perspective. Sometimes you miss that and the story is bit confusing then. But the chapter is great and I look forwards to the next one.

...So glad they didn't die...

Oh no...they're gonna live, right?

...Is Zoe that bad on the harmonica...?

...Damn, what's gonna happen next? XD

...I liked her grandmother...too bad she died soon after she first made an appearance...

Wow...rough night...

LOL MATT'S NOTES AND COMMENTS! XD

LOL Matt's joke made me laugh as well. Great chapter! XD PLEASE UPDATE SOON! XD

That is so cool...