|Reviews for The Old Ones (A Creepypasta)|
| SugarRayne chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
This is almost like an in-universe origin story for the entire Creepypasta concept. Fear indeed always will be with us, and will always take myriad forms, knowing just how best to make us shudder in dread.
I like this, it's just an excellent concept for a story and it really made me think, wonder, and even made me nervous just thinking about it.
| CountryGal12 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
| Lia Jenson chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
I always did love a good origin folk story. However...
I can barely read this case of all the mistakes.
LOOK at it!
"riased in flordia"
Where is Flordia? Never heard of this place, much less being "riased" in Flordia. Or KNARLED fingers. Did you mean "raised" "Florida" and "gnarled"?
I'm not trying to be mean, but hot damn.
Please tell me all these spelling/grammar mistakes are just to parody the suckishness of most Creeypasta.
...Get a beta.
| jimbo271uk chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
I liked the description of "The old ones "and their use as a metaphore for all things we invent in our imaginations to justify fear, but i think the story needs a conclusion as it appears slightly unfinshed at the moment,