Reviews for The Sorceress Apprentice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() First of all, I would like to say WOW. I liked how there was a ton of description, it helped me form a picture of the action inside my head. Azalea is not a common name, but how you used it made it work. Now, I couldn't figure out what time period this was supposed to be set in, but with how she acts, I would have to guess somewhere around the 1980's? Subere I think was written so that us the readers would sort of hate him, but still get why he was valuable to the story. I especially thought that "he would give a long, monotone speech which always boiled down to it's magic bitch!" was funny, I liked how you had Azalea describe how Subere acted so that we could see some more of his character than just a outward description. When Azalea goes back through her memories I thought it would have helped a bit if there was a more definitive line break so that the memories could be more seperate therefore allowing them to be a bit longer. Overall, it was really well written, and I hope to see the others soon! Cheers, Jenna A. L. Marie |