Seriously, I know you said nothing would happen to it, but... I want more.

Hmmmm, interesting, but too short. Please elaborate? I like it though, very poetic. Although, lied should be lay and miasma is spelled like this. That was all I noticed, and these are my helpful hints. Good job.

Oh I see. I see.

Very beautiful, I like how as short as it is, pulled so much detail. Great job!

I loved this! :3