Reviews for The figure
Grace chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
This one had me on edge!
Lina M chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Is this going to be developed into a novel? Or a longer short story?
Either way the story has great promise. It needs a good dose of editting but I like the idea and although the language can be altered here and there, it is good and engaging.

Well done!
keep writing

Love L
x
soulhuntingshewolf chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
this is very creep, but in a good way.
Kurt Kyre chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
The run on paragraph style is distracting, but it's pretty well written. A few spelling errors (warmpth, spigot, and some lower case i's need to be fixed. You have a great sense of terror here, with the way the antagonist drags her out of the shower... he's pretty scary. Good stuff.
Blargh1234 chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Wow...Despite some grammatical errors this is absolutely amazing. I love it :D