Reviews for untitled
teapotdragon chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
This is really pretty. I especially like the description of the garden as "unnecessarily large." I thought it was cute and a very efficient way to tell the reader a lot about the setting. I am a little confused at who the characters are or what is happening but I assume that the obscurity was intentional. I think that the inability of the character's to connect with each other is portrayed really well. This is a very pleasant read :D