Reviews for We all fall down |
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TheLoveless chapter 1 . 11/6/2012 Poor kid. I used to think being Death would be awesome. Now the more I think about it the more it seems like it sucks. Does he even get workman's comp?! |
Thespian Revolutionary chapter 1 . 11/5/2012 That was chilling and beautiful. |
Canino chapter 1 . 11/5/2012 I like Thanatos, but maybe killing the May was a bit much for me?! Oh well, I'm a sap for kids. This was great though, good details, and I could visualize everything excellently. I really like" Thanatos' lips quirked slightly as he allowed it; she was so young…." That's what made me sad! I also like the form Death has taken. I might put a thing that says that you're going to kill a young kill so people know what there getting into. Very good, please continue. |
Naver chapter 1 . 11/4/2012 That was an impressive story. I liked it and I wish there was more to go with it. I really like the idea of the grim reaper having the form of a teenager.. This story really intriges me. ( I really hope you will make more of it.) Again I really like this. Continue to write. :) |